Slow Goodbye
We moved along the roadTaking the long way homeNot wanting our time together to endNot wanting to see each other goThe music was loudForceful vibrations through my bodyI almost forgot this was...
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good expression and tone...this held my attention all the way through, enjoyed, good work!
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Hello PA,Surprise ending - very good.I used to cap every line for old time's sake, but eventually gave it up. Now when I see all-caps, I look to see if it's an acrostic, not so here.Merlin
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Very good...nice twist in the end there! I still remember my first car...and it was a wrench to part with it... Every new beginning comes fromsome other beginnings end...Why not try a new...
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Giving up my first card was wrenching...I remember it well!Great O. Henry ending!
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